A fiery tale

[Big dream]

A fiery tale, by See-truth

I began the day on 2004. As I began every other day since I can remember. The air was fresh and crisp, the sun burning brightly on this beautiful spring day. As every other morning, I walked through the forest trees as tall as wild tree counting at least 3 different kinds of birds chirping happily among the branches. I changed my course, deciding it was time for my daily creating a story. Scurrying down to the forest clearing by around midnight, I ran into S.g happily sitting in the sun reading Alice in Wonderland. I called out to say hello and we began talking about wall painting.

Suddenly, the sun began to move behind the clouds, it began to softly drizzle, and I began to feel strange and all I could taste was fish. I exclaimed, oh mommy! There was a strange smell that filled the air. Was it stinky? Or maybe sucks? Could it be fire? S.g and I took off running through the clearing, seeing Jane, and Aisha, and even Anastasia running for cover! Sparkling eyes, I gulped. What would become of us? What would become of all our homes? I thought fondly of my sweeter and sketch book & colors, would they be lost forever? Rubbing my hair , thinking hard, I looked around trying to find the source of the awful smell that was steadily growing stronger. In all the commotion, I lost sight of S.g, but saw a crowd of Bears gathering in the distance.

By the time I arrived on the scene, the Ranger had poured hot chocolate and noodles all over the raging flames, putting out the fire. Relieved and smiling weakly, I found S.g, as well as my friends Snoopy and Memo and bounced over to them knowing that the day was saved! We all thanked the Ranger over and over, and the sun again broke through the clouds as the last remaining puffs of smoke cleared. S.g grabbed me by the shoulders and shook me excitedly, insisting that we still had time to scamper off to run and make the most of a beautiful day

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[Mohammed's heart]

A fiery fairy tale, by See-truth

I began the day on in 2004. As I began every other day since as far as I can remember. The air was fresh and crisp,and the sun was burning or shining brightly on this beautiful spring day. As every other morning, I walked through the forest trees as tall as wild tree ? what do you mean by that? counting at least 3 different kinds of birds chirping happily among the branches. I changed my course, deciding it was time for my daily creating a story my daily- story-creating. Scurrying down to the forest clearing by around midnight, I ran into S.g happily sitting in the sun reading Alice in Wonderland. I called out to say hello and we began talking about wall painting.

Suddenly, the sun began to move behind the clouds,then it began to softly drizzle or better , it drizzled softly , and after that I began to feel felt strange and all I could taste was fish. I exclaimed, oh mommy! There was a strange smell that filled the air. Was it stinky or rotten or bad? Or maybe sucks disgusting? Could it be fire? S.g and I took off running through the clearing, seeing Jane, and Aisha, and even Anastasia running for cover! Sparkling eyes, I gulped. What would become of happen to us? What would become of all a happen to our homes? I thought fondly or deeply of about my sweater and sketch book & colors, would they be lost forever? Rubbing my hair , thinking hard, I looked around trying to find the source of the awful smell that was steadily growing stronger. In all the commotion, I lost sight of S.g, but saw a crowd of Bears gathering in the distance.

By the time I arrived in or at on the scene, the Ranger had poured hot chocolate and noodles all over the raging flames, putting out the fire. Relieved and smiling weakly, I found S.g, as well as my friends Snoopy and Memo and bounced over to them knowing that the day was saved! We all thanked the Ranger over and over, and the sun again broke through the clouds as the last remaining puffs of smoke cleared. S.g grabbed me by the shoulders and shook me excitedly, insisting that we still had time to scamper off to run and make the most of a beautiful day

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I wrote a note about my relatives. pls go check it out and correct any mistakes.
and by the way I don't want to be the only one to correct mistakes ,pls QTZ and Ghadeer ,take part.

[Big dream]

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