my cousins Girls

[Mohammed's heart]

Mom invited her sisters to come over for a get-together party at home a week ago. of course her sisters brought their annoying kids along.

They were four kids ,aged from 5 to 12 ,(Layal 12 years old),(Mayar 11 years old),(Bayan 10 years old) ,and ( Sarah 5 years old).

apparently ,they are still very little but I guarantee you they can turn any place upside down in less than five minutes.

Layal is the oldest ,she is a little bit fat and strong,she is the leader and would really hurt anyone she dislikes.

The other kids fear her because she always beats them for no reason. she is bigger in size than all the kids and they never dare to confront her at all.

At the party ,while I was having (Sarah) sitting on my lap,Layal walked up to me saying ( Mohammed let Sarah sit somewhere else, I want to
sit on your lap now).

I was like, Sure Sweet Layal ,but you know it is just a matter of time and Sarah will be falling asleep and then I ... , ( I said NOW!) Layal Replied in an angry tone!.

I tried to calm her down but she refused. she was about to pull Sarah away from me and in response to that
Sarah was frantically mad and wanted to start a fight.

I was like ,ok no one is sitting on my lap Go back to your moms!.

Mayar is the cutest of all , her personality is calm ,peaceful and unique,she is a real princess Mashallah. she doesn't hurt or irritate anyone whatsoever.

but-silly of me I know- I like to pester her from time to time. She would rather die and not hear anyone say something bad about her.

I go like ,Mayar.. Do you know what your name means? interestingly she replies.. oh yeah tell me -expecting a compliment lol- I say
Mayar is actually the name of a wild hairy monkey lives in the caves with big ears ........., Naaaaaaaaaaaaaah she cries!.

yes she literally cries. if you tell her 'your hair does not look great 'she will immediately break down.

Bayan is the one I admire the least. she is rude and violent.she never calls her relatives by their real names. she calls them like..
the fatty aunt,the ugly uncle ,and the most terrible cousins in the world-me- lol .

Sarah is who I like the most. she is my love. she always looks for me when she arrives in my house, and in whichever situation
she would sit on my lap ,whether when I am eating , studying ,sitting on the chair ,or lying down in bed.

she has that great story I am always eager to hear about her own secret room. she claims she has a secret room back at home no one knows about.

in her secret room are three magical beds. The first one
is on the floor, she uses it when she wants to sleep.

The second one is dangling from the ceiling,she uses it when she wants to think deeply about something.

The third one is transparent ,no one sees it
except those she loves ! however ,she uses it when she wants no one to see her. imagine ! how clever !

anyway ,I had a good time that night except when I saw the refrigerator.They turned it to a mess !

In the first shelf of the refrigerator are many glasses of juice and soda they did not drink up. they just grab whatever is on the table and take few sips, then just put it in the refrigerator so they will drink it later ,but they will never!.

The second shelf is crammed with pieces of cakes
,muffins,and donuts. of course crumbs are everywhere!. it is disgusting

The bottom shelf of the refrigerator is a disaster. piles of half eaten fruit and some candy and chocolate are
in the first row ,and in the second row they keep their wallets and money .imagine! money in the refrigerator !

They drove me insane that night ,and I was barely controling myself. those kids were really demonic!

[Big dream]

what a funny story

I like it so much

Keep it up






you've really helps to raise my smile

thank you so much

[Mohammed's heart]

did you check it for mistakes

pls

[Big dream]

I will

first time for fun

second reading

with a soon reply

[Mohammed's heart]

Shukran Wallahi now we can really benefit from each others

Thank you Teacher Seethetruth

[Big dream]

Mom has invited her sisters to come over for a get-together party at home a week ago. Of course her sisters brought their annoying kids along.

They were four kids, aged from 5 to 12, (Layal 12 years old), (Mayar 11 years old), (Bayan 10 years old), and (Sarah 5 years old).

Apparently, they are still very little but I guarantee you they can turn any place upside down in less than five minutes.

Layal is the oldest, she is a little bit fat and strong; she is the leader and would really hurt anyone she dislikes.

The other kids fear her because she always beats them for no reason. She is bigger in size than all the kids and they never dare to confront her at all.

At the party, while I was having (Sarah) sitting on my lap, Layal walked up to me saying (Mohammed let Sarah sit somewhere else; I want to
sit on your lap now).

I was like, Sure Sweet Layal, but you know it is just a matter of time and Sarah will be falling asleep and then I ..., (I said NOW!) Layal Replied in an angry tone!

I tried to calm her down but she refused. She was about to pull Sarah away from me and in response to that
Sarah was frantically mad and wanted to start a fight.

I was like, ok no one is sitting on my lap Go back to your moms!

Mayar is the cutest of all, her personality is calm, peaceful and unique, and she is a real princess Mashallah. She doesn't hurt or irritate anyone whatsoever.

But-silly of me I know- I like to pester her from time to time. She would rather die and not hear anyone say something bad about her.

I go like, Mayar. Do you know what your name means? Interestingly she replies. Oh yeah tell me -expecting a compliment lol- I say
Mayar is actually the name of a wild hairy monkey lives in the caves with big ears ........., Naaaaaaaaaaaaaah she cries!

Yes she literally cries. If you tell her 'your hair does not look great 'she will immediately break down.

Bayan is the one I admire the least. She is rude and violent. She never calls her relatives by their real names. She calls them like,
(The fatty aunt, the ugly uncle, and the most terrible cousins in the world-me-) lol.

Sarah is who I like the most. She is my love. she always looks for me when she arrives in my house, and in whichever situation
she would sit on my lap ,whether when I am eating , studying ,sitting on the chair ,or lying down in bed.

She has that great story I am always eager to hear about her own secret room. She claims she has a secret room back at home no one knows about.

In her secret room are three magical beds. The first one
is on the floor; she uses it when she wants to sleep.

The second one is dangling from the ceiling; she uses it when she wants to think deeply about something.

The third one is transparent; no one sees it
except those she loves! However, she uses it when she wants no one to see her. Imagine! How clever!

Anyway, I had a good time that night except when I saw the refrigerator. They turned it to a mess!

In the first shelf of the refrigerator are many glasses of juice and soda they did not drink up. they just grab whatever is on the table and take few sips, then just put it in the refrigerator so they will drink it later ,but they will never!.

The second shelf is crammed with pieces of cakes
, muffins, and donuts. Of course crumbs are everywhere! It is disgusting

the bottom shelf of the refrigerator is a disaster. Piles of half eaten fruit and some candy and chocolate are
in the first row, and in the second row they keep their wallets and money .imagine! Money in the refrigerator!

They drove me insane that night, and I was barely controlling myself. Those kids were really demonic!

Just becareful with using commas and fullstops

otherwise

everything is perfect

way to go / keep it up

[Mohammed's heart]

ok inshallah T3ala ,thanks for the correction

[وآثقة الخطى]

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It was a nice story , I've enjoyed it
and realy I learned new Voc.
Thanks alot Mr. Mohammad

[طالبـة الشهادة]

Such a nice story .. Nice as a story
but as an event .. I don't think It is a pleasant one
You have a great ability to tolerate this kind of kids.


Nice to see you here again.
keep it up.

[إرتقآء]

Actually , through my reading i saw my son's sis in + my smile raises morely with each line ^^  
I like it as much i like the kids

[Mohammed's heart]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة طالبـة الشهادة Such a nice story .. Nice as a story but as an event .. I don't think It is a pleasant one You have a great ability to tolerate this kind of kids. Nice to see you here again. keep it up.

thank you very much

[Mohammed's heart]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة إرتقآء Actually , through my reading i saw my son's sis in + my smile raises morely with each line ^^ I like it as much i like the kids

Coooooooool

thanks for passing by

[The next dream]

A Funny Story & good wiriting.
Keep the good work but I have a comment on the title. It's better to say "My Cousins daughters
"..

[Mohammed's heart]

Thank you for your remark...but in fact .they are not my Cousins daughters.they are actually my cousins who happen to be girls ,not boys
"