ورشة عمل [5] / فريق غزة !

[سما المجد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة وحدي أسير عدلت في الصياغة لأنه شوي ملخبطة . Her mother awaited a year and a half to have her, her first baby.. She was shot by an Israeli missile that came in her chest, going through her flesh.. her bones, and coming out of her back. Eman was in the hands of her mother.

الله يعطيكِ العافية يا أختي ..

قمت بارسالها الة ورشة التصميم مع الصور الخاصة بها ..

[الألماسه]

oh , my god

we are wringed

Thus helped us

the pleas is lost only you



يارب

إنا مظلومون ..
انقطع الرجاء إلا منك

( بس يبيلها شوية تعديل )

[سامر الماهر]

سأرجع في العاشرة..
موفقين

[رَوَنْـدْ]

..

بارك الله فيكم ..

..

[وحدي أسير]

^ الله يجعله في موازين حسناتك .

[ندى بنت علي]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله وبركاته =)
أود الاستفسار أيها الإحبة ..
هل المعتمد في الترجمة في هذا الموضوع أم الموضوع الآخر

█ :: لأجلِ غزة -- For Gaza :: █


وإذا سمحتِ أختي ميلاد أنثى ..
هل من الممكن جمع الصور و الترجمة المعتمدة الصحيحة في موضوع مستقل ..

حتى يسهل للمصمم / ـة الرجوع إليها ..
فقد تهت بين الردود ..

وشكرًا جزيلًا ..

[واقعي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة وحدي أسير + في الجمل الثانية من الرد اللي قبل هذا : أقترح أضفاة من هم المدنين . مثلا: What's happening in Gaza is a slaughter against innocent Palestinian civilians, children, mothers, and old men.

البروبزيشن سقط سهواً
...

أتمنى جمع العبارات المنقحة من الأخطاء في موضوع أخر ليمكن للإخوة الانتقاء منها

[~شـمـــوخ نجـد~]

لدي بعض الجمل ان رأيتموها ستخدم فترجموهـا

عزة تحت امطار النار..

اطفال عزة يبعوا العابهم ليعيشوا..

اطفال غزة..اطفال بلا طفولة..

بلا طعام بلا شراب بلا مسكن باختصار حياة بلا حياة..

هل هذة هي الطفولة؟!! إذا متى ستنتهي طفولتي؟!!

[ميــ أنثى ــلاد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Nada Ali السلام عليكم و رحمة الله وبركاته =) أود الاستفسار أيها الإحبة .. هل المعتمد في الترجمة في هذا الموضوع أم الموضوع الآخر █ :: لأجلِ غزة -- For Gaza :: █ وإذا سمحتِ أختي ميلاد أنثى .. هل من الممكن جمع الصور و الترجمة المعتمدة الصحيحة في موضوع مستقل .. حتى يسهل للمصمم / ـة الرجوع إليها .. فقد تهت بين الردود .. وشكرًا جزيلًا ..

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة واقعي أتمنى جمع العبارات المنقحة من الأخطاء في موضوع أخر ليمكن للإخوة الانتقاء منها

تم إدراج الموضوع هنا ..
نتاج ورشة عمل [5] / فريق غزة!

[~شـمـــوخ نجـد~]

جملة أخرى ..

لا غذاء .. لا كهرباء.. لا مسكن .. لا امان .. تلك هي الحياة في غزة

[Queen]

They say they can change today if tomorrow was yesterday
But their faces betray the black words just a breath away
Caught up in their pollution and clinging to addictions
It’s clear no truth they believe in fiction
Hanging on Fine thin threads invisible to the eye
All tangled up, definitions of their lives
(As I watch crying from here)

In their eyes I can see their lies
In their lies I can see their lives
And in their lives I can see their cries
But tonight
Its just me
Inside
This house
Alone
Nothing
To hold
No crash
Or burn

One, two, the battle is on in their heads
Braving scars and waging wars like living dead
Meetings and fleetings and God-knows-what feelings
condemn their behaviour and favour peace greetings
but, yes, get back safely, warm and cosy inside
all caught up in your perfect little lives
(as I watch crying from here)

In their eyes I can see their lies
In their lies I can see their lives
And in their lives I can see their cries
But tonight
Its just me
Inside
This house
Alone
Nothing
To hold
No crash
Or burn




I Find it hard to be easy
When everyone is killing me
because I am alive
To no one’s eyes
So what does that make me?
Do you even know who I am?
I’m like a victim of a crime
Just a being forgotten by time
Search for me and all will be fine…

In their eyes I can see their lies
In their lies I can see their lives
And in their lives I can see their cries
But tonight
Its just me
Inside
This house
Alone
Nothing
To hold
No crash
Or burn

[ندى بنت علي]

شكرًا ميلاد

[الألماسه]

No food .. No electricity .. Homeless .. Not safe .. That is life in Gaza
لا غذاء .. لا كهرباء .. لا مسكن .. تلك هي الحياة في غزة ..!

[سما المجد]

هذا خبر عن محمد الدرة , من يقوم باختصارهِ مشكوراً !


Muhammad Jamal al-Durrah (1988-2000) Arabic: محمد جمال الدرة‎) was a Palestinian who was killed during a clash between the IDF and Palestinian Security Forces in the Gaza Strip on September 30, 2000, in the early days of the Second Intifada.[1] The cause of the death is disputed. Initially, it was reported the the boy was killed as a result of IDF gunfire, however some investigations have suggested that he might have been killed by Palestinian gunfire, and some people believe that the entire incident was staged.[2]

The original reports stemmed from footage recorded by a Palestinian cameraman filming for the French public television network France 2.[3][4] The footage shows al-Durrah and his father taking cover from crossfire behind a concrete cylinder, then apparently being hit. The scenes were broadcast with a voice-over from Charles Enderlin, the channel's bureau chief in Israel, who was not present during the incident; he told viewers that the father and son had been the "target of fire coming from the Israeli position."[5] France 2 made three minutes of the tape available without charge to other television stations, and the scenes were aired around the world. The boy quickly became a martyr in the Arab world and a symbol of Palestinian grievances against Israel.

Three days later, the Israeli army chief of operations said an internal investigation showed that "the shots were apparently fired by Israeli soldiers"; he issued an apology, expressing sorrow and calling the incident "heartrending"; at the same time accusing the Palestinians of the "cynical use" of children in the conflict.[6] A second investigation carried out for the army's southern command two months later called it "a very reasonable possibility" that al-Durrah had been hit by Palestinian bullets, and expressed "great doubt" over Israeli responsibility.[7] In 2002, an investigative report by the ARD German television edited by Esther Schapira also said there was a "high probability" that the Israelis were not responsible.[8][9] France 2's news editor, Arlette Chabot, said in 2005 that no one could say for certain who might have fired the shots, although Enderlin stands by his original report.[10]

The controversy was furthered when commentators began challenging Enderlin's reporting, asking why the France 2 footage did not show the actual shooting or the moment of the boy's death, and why no forensic evidence was available. Denis Jeambar, a former editor of L'Express, and Daniel Leconte, a documentary producer, were given access to France 2's raw footage in 2004, and later wrote in Le Figaro: "At the time when Charles Enderlin presented the boy as dead, he had no possibility of determining that he was in fact dead, and even less so, that he had been shot by IDF soldiers."[10] Other commentators — including Daniel Seaman, the Israeli government's chief press officer — have gone further in their criticism, alleging that the entire incident was staged with the knowledge of the cameraman.[10] In 2004, France 2 sued Philippe Karsenty, a French media watchdog, after he called the incident a "hoax". France 2 won the initial defamation case, the court ruling that Karsenty had "seriously failed to meet the requirements expected of an information professional."[11] In May 2008, that judgment was set aside by the Paris Court of Appeal, which ruled that Karsenty had presented a "coherent mass of evidence" and had "exercised in good faith his right to free criticism."[12] France 2 has said it will appeal the decision to the Cour de cassation, France's highest court.[13] In July of 2008, the French Jewish umbrella group, CRIF, called on the government to initiate a probe of the authenticity of the original report. The status of such a probe is as yet unclear.[14]




جزئية أن المصور فرنسي مهمة ارجو عدم حذفها ..

[SumaiabdullatiF]

|[....

Different sentences.. I hope it's Full and True .. [

حصار ضد الإنسانية،

..Siege against humanity

حصار ضد الطفولة،

Siege against Children ..

حصار ضد الحياة !

Siege against The Life !

....]|

[فارس العز]

عندي فكرة تصميم

4

killed by
Palestinian

&


393
kille by
Israelian military


Just compare

[سما المجد]

^
^
^


باشر العمل يا فاضل ..

[فارس العز]

شموخ المجد شكرا
و هذه بعض الجمل التي أعجبتني فترجمتها
اتمنى أن يستفيد منها الإخوان


اطفال غزة..اطفال بلا طفولة..

Gaza childern......children without childhood

بلا طعام بلا شراب بلا مسكن باختصار حياة بلا حياة

No Food
No Drink
No Home

Breifly

No life

[عازفة الآهات]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة *سما المجد * هذا خبر عن محمد الدرة , من يقوم باختصارهِ مشكوراً ! Muhammad Jamal al-Durrah (1988-2000) Arabic: محمد جمال الدرة‎) was a Palestinian who was killed during a clash between the IDF and Palestinian Security Forces in the Gaza Strip on September 30, 2000, in the early days of the Second Intifada.[1] The cause of the death is disputed. Initially, it was reported the the boy was killed as a result of IDF gunfire, however some investigations have suggested that he might have been killed by Palestinian gunfire, and some people believe that the entire incident was staged.[2] The original reports stemmed from footage recorded by a Palestinian cameraman filming for the French public television network France 2.[3][4] The footage shows al-Durrah and his father taking cover from crossfire behind a concrete cylinder, then apparently being hit. The scenes were broadcast with a voice-over from Charles Enderlin, the channel's bureau chief in Israel, who was not present during the incident; he told viewers that the father and son had been the "target of fire coming from the Israeli position."[5] France 2 made three minutes of the tape available without charge to other television stations, and the scenes were aired around the world. The boy quickly became a martyr in the Arab world and a symbol of Palestinian grievances against Israel. Three days later, the Israeli army chief of operations said an internal investigation showed that "the shots were apparently fired by Israeli soldiers"; he issued an apology, expressing sorrow and calling the incident "heartrending"; at the same time accusing the Palestinians of the "cynical use" of children in the conflict.[6] A second investigation carried out for the army's southern command two months later called it "a very reasonable possibility" that al-Durrah had been hit by Palestinian bullets, and expressed "great doubt" over Israeli responsibility.[7] In 2002, an investigative report by the ARD German television edited by Esther Schapira also said there was a "high probability" that the Israelis were not responsible.[8][9] France 2's news editor, Arlette Chabot, said in 2005 that no one could say for certain who might have fired the shots, although Enderlin stands by his original report.[10] The controversy was furthered when commentators began challenging Enderlin's reporting, asking why the France 2 footage did not show the actual shooting or the moment of the boy's death, and why no forensic evidence was available. Denis Jeambar, a former editor of L'Express, and Daniel Leconte, a documentary producer, were given access to France 2's raw footage in 2004, and later wrote in Le Figaro: "At the time when Charles Enderlin presented the boy as dead, he had no possibility of determining that he was in fact dead, and even less so, that he had been shot by IDF soldiers."[10] Other commentators — including Daniel Seaman, the Israeli government's chief press officer — have gone further in their criticism, alleging that the entire incident was staged with the knowledge of the cameraman.[10] In 2004, France 2 sued Philippe Karsenty, a French media watchdog, after he called the incident a "hoax". France 2 won the initial defamation case, the court ruling that Karsenty had "seriously failed to meet the requirements expected of an information professional."[11] In May 2008, that judgment was set aside by the Paris Court of Appeal, which ruled that Karsenty had presented a "coherent mass of evidence" and had "exercised in good faith his right to free criticism."[12] France 2 has said it will appeal the decision to the Cour de cassation, France's highest court.[13] In July of 2008, the French Jewish umbrella group, CRIF, called on the government to initiate a probe of the authenticity of the original report. The status of such a probe is as yet unclear.[14] جزئية أن المصور فرنسي مهمة ارجو عدم حذفها ..

جاري ...

[قماري]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ~شـمـــوخ نجـد~ لدي بعض الجمل ان رأيتموها ستخدم فترجموهـا عزة تحت امطار النار.. اطفال عزة يبعوا العابهم ليعيشوا.. اطفال غزة..اطفال بلا طفولة.. بلا طعام بلا شراب بلا مسكن باختصار حياة بلا حياة.. هل هذة هي الطفولة؟!! إذا متى ستنتهي طفولتي؟!!

علي